tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8890073820568055339.post3648234181042040925..comments2023-10-18T01:50:04.414-07:00Comments on Icestar's Warrior Cat Blog: Flarekit☠♥Maddie♥☠http://www.blogger.com/profile/08563278146390733242noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8890073820568055339.post-79679669941888005652011-12-15T12:28:42.904-08:002011-12-15T12:28:42.904-08:00This is why its called a 'short story' ano...This is why its called a 'short story' anonymous. She wanted to focus in on one character, and not go on explaining Flarekit's clan. It doesn't really matter about the length, its really just Maddie's choice. Though those were good comments if she wanted to write a whole story about him. :)♥Warriors101♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/06340408049731708064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8890073820568055339.post-21579258719586927122011-12-13T19:36:34.991-08:002011-12-13T19:36:34.991-08:00Nice, but you could build up a little suspense bef...Nice, but you could build up a little suspense before flarekit is taken away by the eagle. Plus you should explain maybe a little more about Iceclan in your little short story. Also there isn't any character description. And it's way too short. It just started an dthen it abruptly ended as your reader began to enjoy it and visualize all the surroundings. It was over too fast.<br />Now that I'm done criticizing your story, here are some good things:<br />-pretty interesting and not too abrupt<br />-nice name-flarekit-i like itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8890073820568055339.post-75608543749500469402011-10-13T13:24:59.627-07:002011-10-13T13:24:59.627-07:00EEEEEKKKKK icestar the Erins have confirmed that t...EEEEEKKKKK icestar the Erins have confirmed that they are making a new super edition all about yellowfang!!!!! Its called yellowfang s secret. Don't believe me type in yellowfangs secret then go to wiki then scroll down till ya see reveled at kate carts website or vicky's face book pageHollyheartnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8890073820568055339.post-7116345042979829962011-10-12T12:21:14.977-07:002011-10-12T12:21:14.977-07:00Icestar do you believe that hollyleaf is alive and...Icestar do you believe that hollyleaf is alive and if so do you like her (not like mating like just do you like her character) write back soonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8890073820568055339.post-72869619486184031882010-09-19T11:20:39.024-07:002010-09-19T11:20:39.024-07:00:/ I know. It just goes to show what can happen if...:/ I know. It just goes to show what can happen if you are overly curious and you dont follow the rules. In this story Flarekit can represent a young kid who is in the wrong place at a very wrong time☠♥Maddie♥☠https://www.blogger.com/profile/08563278146390733242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8890073820568055339.post-44075072925105487292010-09-19T07:59:27.342-07:002010-09-19T07:59:27.342-07:00Poor Flareki :'(Poor Flareki :'(Charismahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05659735980577389483noreply@blogger.com